100WC T2W5
Shivering and shaking, I stare. The castle on the hill no one dared to go in. The mossy door creaks opens, I step. Looking around, all I see is pitch black. The world was chilled still, and I was all by myself. Scared. In the flash of lighting I saw a big bulky shadow rise behind me. I'm trapped, scrambling around in this little room trying to untie myself. I hear the howling of the wolves outside my window. I sit up in my damp bed. Looking around me i'm still in my room. It was all just a dream.
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