Wednesday 31 May 2017
grace
In the flash of lighting i saw a little cute puppy.Cold and wet whimpering for some love.The puppy looked very dehydrated.Come on little guy come home with me. I picked him up in my warm jacket and he snuggled up into my arms.Here we go little guy home sweet home. I took him in and put him by the toasty hot fire to dry his coat. Here is some water little guy he drank it up like he hadn't seen water in years. I gave him a fluffy blanket and snuggled up next to him.
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Great story grace might want to check the spelling but bravo gurls from izzy
ReplyDeletegood job my friend...yay
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