In the flash of lightning I saw…
Poem
One rainy day I was getting really bored.
I slouched to my mother but I tripped over a cord.
Realizing life is not easy.
I felt a little bit queasy.
So I went to the kitchen and cooked a meal.
And I looked out the window, looking at something ideal.
That sunset was actually perfection.
But it turned out to be a misconception.
That light had disappeared.
And what came out was very weird.
In the flash of lightning I saw.
One sick little trembling paw.
Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy.
Was crawled up outside my house.
So small, looking like a mouse.
By Natasha Raza
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