They had been hiding for days there was no stop. They were so thirsty they had forgotten the taste of fresh water. Rajah had been hiding from a terrorist outrage with his family. They had stopped in a cave for the night. Rajah had heard some water drops,he ran in the direction of the water. He found it,it was a little water outlet it was so clear he thought it was to good to be true. He moved a rock it was like a waterfall,the water just kept gushing out! “This is too good to be true!”
Saturday 10 June 2017
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