Thursday, 7 September 2017

Grace

So I was just strolling through the bush and in the corner of my eye I  saw this massive big hairy thing eating a fish. So I thought it was just a bear but I looked closer and it was a 7 foot high man eating big foot. So of course I took a photo and posted it online. Then I called the animal control people and they came and picked him up the end.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 September 2017 at 20:17

    Hi Grace,
    This is a really good story! I love the great ideas you had!
    If you want you can see and comment on my classes 100 word challenges!
    Here is the link to my classes blog!:
    https://7wshs.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Abbie13 September 2017 at 09:31

    Hi Grace I really love your story it's really good would you do me a big favour and go and comment on minehttp://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-21/previous/3 Thank you from Abbie Boylan from St Mary's Parish primary school

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