Tuesday 1 August 2017
100 WC
Hello, my name is John Fox and I’m a secret spy that works in a very gruesome lab in Gotham City. I've been working on a very high tech experiment which makes anything go the speed of light. One night I was going to the lab when all of a sudden it started. The benches started moving, the lab started shaking, it was almost like a bunch of elephants were stomping on the ground. But then the flash made me, the man himself - Whipflash. I couldn’t believe it, I was Whipflash, me, John Fox. I was the speed of light.
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