tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post8547895577367409829..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Corbin T4W4nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-48870738759654316282017-11-14T20:11:06.317-08:002017-11-14T20:11:06.317-08:00I liked your story, but I was a bit confused with ...I liked your story, but I was a bit confused with the whole story line. Next time try to be a bit more clear.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-49364750326959876102017-11-12T07:30:39.075-08:002017-11-12T07:30:39.075-08:00Hey Corbin! That's a cool story which matches ...Hey Corbin! That's a cool story which matches the prompt well. Just remember to check through and edit your writing - for example: Clowns (no apostrophe) and Central France, where all the nice people were (use of a comma and better word than nice).<br />Keep writing!<br />From Mr Hales - North Norfolk, England, UK - #TEAM100wcAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-24806917572151543282017-11-08T12:45:56.570-08:002017-11-08T12:45:56.570-08:00We enjoyed reading your story because we have a fe...We enjoyed reading your story because we have a few people in our class who feel the same way about Hallowe'en. We also liked the little twist at the end of your story. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13915332556408980298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-72057800427611683712017-11-07T23:56:31.067-08:002017-11-07T23:56:31.067-08:00I really like your story! Maybe next time put some...I really like your story! Maybe next time put some describing words in there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-11340791408602754452017-11-07T23:31:48.576-08:002017-11-07T23:31:48.576-08:00I really liked your story line. Maybe next time yo...I really liked your story line. Maybe next time you could add more structure to your story to have a nice flowing story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com