tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post8061866348643717348..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Ashton 100WC T4 W7nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-52127075864209691262017-12-01T22:54:38.670-08:002017-12-01T22:54:38.670-08:00Bye the way the comment doesn't make sense bec...Bye the way the comment doesn't make sense because said "I liked the way you hooked the reader" and then you said "Maybe next time put some exciting plot into the story so the reader can be interested"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-82550009333292577462017-11-28T21:13:37.307-08:002017-11-28T21:13:37.307-08:00 Nice work. I liked how you made a normal day into... Nice work. I liked how you made a normal day into a interesting one that people can read about. I liked how you first hooked the reader in by putting an onomatopoeia in. Maybe next time put some exciting plot into the story so the reader can be interested.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com