tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post7691080502034071448..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Max 100wc T4W2nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-84415211756195243212017-10-25T22:52:07.727-07:002017-10-25T22:52:07.727-07:00Creepy Story Max. I think that next time you could...Creepy Story Max. I think that next time you could use a capital 'I'. And use the proper sentence, the sentence was 'as the door slammed I knew'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-40038487823555370752017-10-25T12:20:32.628-07:002017-10-25T12:20:32.628-07:00I really liked your story! I especially liked the ...I really liked your story! I especially liked the storyline and the starting of your story. Maybe next time you could Use more capital letter like. e.g. i knew Jim thought... the I needs to be a capital letter. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-77137051132411883122017-10-24T23:05:03.254-07:002017-10-24T23:05:03.254-07:00I really like your starting "In a creepy town...I really like your starting "In a creepy town in a creepy house. Maybe next time think about your capital letters and commas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com