tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post6109296510036847929..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Bradley 100WC T4W1nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-82019352424947427972017-10-18T22:46:06.689-07:002017-10-18T22:46:06.689-07:00I really liked the storyline and how everything fl...I really liked the storyline and how everything flowed together. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-90370538789188053822017-10-18T21:24:39.509-07:002017-10-18T21:24:39.509-07:00Cool story Bradeley,
It was very picture setting i...Cool story Bradeley,<br />It was very picture setting in my mind while reading this, maybe use more descriptive/ hooking language.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-35426335900054661902017-10-17T21:33:43.670-07:002017-10-17T21:33:43.670-07:00Nice job Bradley,
I liked how you wrote it in a un...Nice job Bradley,<br />I liked how you wrote it in a unique way, instead of being the witness you are the victim. Next time I think that you could use a hooking sentence to hook your reader in and use some exciting language to keep the reader engaged.<br />NatashaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com