tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post5639125416613404761..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Connor 100WC W8 T4nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-1895156692287567242017-12-12T11:36:40.083-08:002017-12-12T11:36:40.083-08:00Hi Connor,
I like how you build suspense with viv...Hi Connor, <br />I like how you build suspense with vivid dialogue tags and verbs. You also make me want to know more by the cliffhanger, and I want to know how a tiger is near the beach! <br />Keep writing:)<br />Mrs. Kimball - Team 100<br />A.E.Wright Middle School<br />Calabasas, CA USA<br />AEWKKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16898927984531070209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-76422258842348098202017-12-06T11:49:51.877-08:002017-12-06T11:49:51.877-08:00I really liked the twist at the end of your story ...I really liked the twist at the end of your story because it acted as a cliffhanger and left me wanting to know more. I also liked the level of description and that this description was so detailed, it made the story feel very real. I enjoyed reading this, especially because of how effectively you create tension, the story was dramatic and filled with action and this made it very fun to read. Great work, keep it up!<br /><br />Amii Bristol - 100 wc.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com