tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post3707775442987113849..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: 100 Word Challenge Ryannzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-89972499085015647532017-11-02T14:46:39.621-07:002017-11-02T14:46:39.621-07:00I like your story Ryan.I like how you used descrip...I like your story Ryan.I like how you used descriptive words e.g anxious and slammed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-829961283210240842017-11-01T22:05:25.125-07:002017-11-01T22:05:25.125-07:00I liked some of the descriptive words you used. e....I liked some of the descriptive words you used. e.g exotic, anxious.<br />Try to get your capitals right, add some commas and make sure your sentence make sense.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-6223341759946016352017-11-01T14:24:08.628-07:002017-11-01T14:24:08.628-07:00I personally liked your describing words like: anx...I personally liked your describing words like: anxious and exotic.<br />Next time you could add more punctuation. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-75517602144487284492017-10-26T00:31:05.948-07:002017-10-26T00:31:05.948-07:00I really like how you did you theme is was very di...I really like how you did you theme is was very different. maybe next time you could try to use more descriptive sentence starters.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-54866878856850898722017-10-26T00:23:37.132-07:002017-10-26T00:23:37.132-07:00I really liked your descriptive words such as beau...I really liked your descriptive words such as beautiful and exotic. <br />Next time you should add more commas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com