tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post3390886411236869073..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: Connor 100WC T4 W7nzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-4693409937879016962017-11-29T21:17:47.439-08:002017-11-29T21:17:47.439-08:00I really liked how your story rhymed.
Next time ch...I really liked how your story rhymed.<br />Next time check your punctuation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-54886015375383682532017-11-29T20:07:21.124-08:002017-11-29T20:07:21.124-08:00I liked the rhyming words in your story.
Maybe nex...I liked the rhyming words in your story.<br />Maybe next time you could put a full stop instead of a comma for: lived in a shoe. He ate white bread.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-55397610973471806492017-11-28T15:35:17.643-08:002017-11-28T15:35:17.643-08:00Nice rhyming Connor but maybe next time add capita...Nice rhyming Connor but maybe next time add capital letters at the start of each sentence Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com