tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post1298817098940106978..comments2023-05-02T08:57:23.749-07:00Comments on 8GMc 100WC: 100 WC Ryannzdigiteacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15887854981221609757noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-68909990934244164472017-11-15T23:31:24.571-08:002017-11-15T23:31:24.571-08:00Good story Ryan. I liked your description about Ke...Good story Ryan. I liked your description about Kevin, it was different and interesting. Maybe next time don't write it from Kevin's perspective and write the story from a narrator's perspective of Kevin. and 'I'm' has a capital 'I'.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5934824168324053193.post-22409277016201888672017-11-15T20:09:41.705-08:002017-11-15T20:09:41.705-08:00cool story ryan really funny, maybe not repeat as ...cool story ryan really funny, maybe not repeat as much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com